tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7882695509624109517.post5531209399013935364..comments2023-06-03T03:02:08.174-05:00Comments on Glints of Light: PeacefulKellyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14004066681723347094noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7882695509624109517.post-91132317022688315872010-04-07T17:15:12.061-05:002010-04-07T17:15:12.061-05:00GIven what you first sent me, this was not at all ...GIven what you first sent me, this was not at all the poem I expected. As always, the concreteness of your images are wonderful. You raise an issue about sleep that I find intriguing: vulnerability. But that's to explore another day.<br /><br />I do like your use of perspective here, that you're getting inside the head of the person sleeping next to you.Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05865509490449761298noreply@blogger.com